Translations
He stationed garrisons in every corner of Edom — throughout all Edom his garrisons stood guard — and all the Edomites became servants to David. Yahweh gave victory to David wherever he went.
He put garrisons throughout all Edom — throughout all Edom he put garrisons — and all the Edomites became servants to Dawid. YHWH gave victory to Dawid wherever he went.
And he put garrisons in Edom; throughout all Edom put he garrisons, and all they of Edom became David's servants. And the LORD preserved David whithersoever he went.
He placed garrisons throughout Edom, and all the Edomites were subject to David. So the LORD made David victorious wherever he went.

